LEARASHI

Congratulations on finishing this verse~
I hope I did not make you do too many adjustments against your initial plans. I really came to enjoy this verse, especially the relationship between Sho and Jun.

I don't believe I have seen this rough sex from you before? (; It was very hot, especially this: "Jun shuddered, tears running down his cheeks as Sho wove his wings through his feathers, touching every sensitive spot that he knew would give him the most pleasure. Jun's wings flailed behind him as Sho pulled him upright and fucked up into him, Sho's wings wrapping around his chest, holding him close."
The thought of Sho ripping off one of his own scales to give it to Jun displays such raw love and need to possess Jun, and it really appeals to me.

I see you used the Nino/Toma idea :D Nino would probably be less happy, if he was the only one in the group with no partner, or no love interest. It would probably also make it more painful for him to look at Jun and Sho.

I believe this was a very good end for all of them.

Thank you for posting this ^^