http://cielmelodies.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] cielmelodies.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] learashi 2017-02-24 03:11 pm (UTC)

You're forgiven. LOL. <3 <3 SO SWEET. But, I must admit, my heart ached at some instances because it was actually... quite realistic and relatable.

>“I hurt you so many times over the years. Every time you told me that you loved me and I was too scared to say the words back to you out loud, as if somehow by saying them my family would hear me. You gave me everything; your love, your body, your soul and all you got from me in return was more hurt.”

Yes. Sho is a BLOODY COWARD AND SELFISH IDIOT FOR DOING THAT.

> "But now you tell me that you broke my heart because you decided that it was for my own good?”

This infuriates me because this HAPPENS IN REAL LIFE. ^ It's the most selfish thing to do because how the hell is the person supposed to know what is 'good' for the other? Without prior discussion? YUP.

Okay sorry. That bit really... it makes the entire situation so real because that's a geunine shitty action that people do, and it just hurts both sides.
That being said, I think you nailed the feelings and the development of their relationship perfectly. It's realistic and relatable and it makes my heart ache a lot because my ex did the exact shit to me but he's a selfish jackass and Shochan please don't be stupid anymore.
So please don't hide in your holeeeeee, while it is a lovely hole indeed.

I imagine there would be a part 3 to this where there would be an aftermath with the team members? *hint* :D :D :D >:D

Just kidding, don't force yourself ^^ Thank you for this. It makes me feel less sad, especially seeing how Sho's beating himself up over it. At least he was beating himself up over it, unlike some people bloop okay will stop sorry this fic touched a few nerves but not in a bad way but in a IT'S SO GOOD that it hurts.

Thank you for doing this <3 :))))


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